Can I get some feedback on my poem? Its not emo I promise?

It's decent. The first few stanzas were very intriguing and paints a very vivid picture but as the stanzas go on, it gets progressively more and more boring. Also, yes it's a poem but it doesn't have to rhyme. You really try to make every last word every 2nd or 3rd line rhyme and that's a very elementary/primary way to write a poem.